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,Gone from the grasps of reality,
Feel the grace of finality,
Never look back, only ahead,
Free, body and soul, ascend,
The flying force, maintaining your hair,
Dart to the sky, over the clouds is where,
Keep running, you will not fall,
The heart, the power within, is all,
Set beyond, run free,
White thunder, follow what you can't see,
I have no name, I have no face,
Matter it not, aim above my pace
No need to look, no need for sound,
Just feel, your destiny, found. <i>
This is one of my many poems I have to submit to my DA account, and I thought this one would sound the best as my first contribution.

And yes, I've been thinking Sonic the Hedgehog when I wrote this XD
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DarkDevilZaria May 4, 2009  Student Digital Artist
OMG that's really good! My BFF has some SERIOUS competition for becoming a writer!
It reminded me of that book Maximum Ride...
LOL XD Hey I'm a nerd too mabey not as big a nerd but still and nerd's are cool!
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:iconcaptain-big-jack:
And together we shall rule the cosmos and the galaxies of the outer limits!

And who's your BBF?
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DarkDevilZaria May 5, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Alison is U don't know her though, but U would probably like her if U did (she's more violent than U are XD)
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"A little fight in her...
I like that."
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DarkDevilZaria May 6, 2009  Student Digital Artist
lol XD
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your really good with poems :]

no wonder u want to be a writer :D

i like the last part about; i have no name, no face
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